Talk:Short Evening Service (William Byrd)

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Errors in CPDL #1424

Most errors also apply to the keyboard reduction.

• Bars 2 & 4, alto 1: cautionary ♭ in bar 4 is correct but then surely there should also be one in bar 2?
• Bar 8, soprano: cautionary ♮ on the minim should just be a ♮ (ie. no brackets)
• Bar 12, tenor: slur missing
• Bar 24, soprano: a cautionary ♭ on the A would be useful
• Bar 27, soprano, alto 1, alto 2 should read "them", not "those"
• Bar 33, alto: surely the final minim of the bar should be an E ♮? This would make sense of the cautionary flat in the next bar.
• Bars 22, 34-7, 40 left hand keyboard reduction: if this is to be notated in two voices then it should be consistent (tenor note stems and flags should point up and bass ones should point down)
• Bars 36-7, all parts: should read "imagination", not "imaginations"
• Bar 43, left hand keyboard reduction: the crotchet rest is a unnecessary and confusing
• Bars 43-44, alto 2: very unlikely. should read something like this:

                     -alt               -ed        the          hum                -ble            and                                                  meek.

• Bar 49, tenor 1: "right" should be "rich"
• Bars 55-58, left hand keyboard reduction: bass line missing
• Bar 57, bass: minim should be one beat later ie. crotchet rest, C minim, F crotchet
• Bar 65, alto: cautionary ♭ would be useful for the A
• Bar 75, alto: first note should be F, not G
• Bar 86, AATTB: "my" should be "mine"
• Bar 93, keyboard reduction: illegible
• Bar 100, tenor: crotchet on 3rd beat should be dotted (remove the rest)
• Bar 102, alto 1: note values should be as other parts
• Bar 114, tenor 1: minim A should be a ♮

--Bobnotts talk 21:17, 13 July 2009 (UTC)